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Carmen Killed My Daughter
Carmen Killed My Daughter

Carmen Killed My Daughter

by Eve Larkins
10 Chapters
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In the mystery novel Carmen Killed My Daughter, a mother’s perfect 18th birthday gala for her child turns into a high-stakes search for answers. Explore this modern young adult fiction story where a celebration of life meets a dark discovery. Read books online free to uncover the truth.
Chapter 1 of Carmen Killed My Daughter

The ballroom glittered with soft golden light as I adjusted the last of the rose gold balloons. Summer's 18th birthday celebration was everything she'd dreamed of—a milestone marking her transition from girl to woman, and I wanted every detail perfect.

"Mom, you've outdone yourself," Summer whispered, appearing beside me in her champagne-colored dress. Her eyes sparkled with excitement as she surveyed the venue I'd spent weeks transforming into her vision of perfection.

I smoothed her hair, tucking a strand behind her ear. "Only the best for my princess."

The hotel's grand ballroom had been transformed with crystal chandeliers, elegant floral arrangements, and a custom cake that towered four tiers high. I'd invited over fifty guests—Summer's closest friends, our family, and several colleagues from Richard's law firm.

"Where's Dad?" Summer asked, scanning the room.

"Probably still at the office." I checked my watch. "But he promised to be here by seven."

As if summoned by our conversation, Richard appeared in the doorway, his tall frame impeccable in his charcoal suit. Behind him trailed a woman I recognized with a jolt—Carmen Cox, his ex-wife.

"Helena," Richard called, striding toward us. "Sorry I'm late. Carmen and her son were just leaving when I mentioned the party. I hope you don't mind they've joined us."

Before I could respond, Carmen stepped forward, her smile practiced and perfect. "Richard insisted we stay for a bit. This is my son, Kaiser."

The young man beside her nodded politely, his eyes never quite meeting mine. Something about him made my skin prickle, but I pushed the feeling aside. This was Summer's night.

---

Hours later, the party was in full swing. Summer floated from group to group, radiant and happy, accepting gifts and compliments. I watched her with pride swelling in my chest, sipping champagne as I chatted with other parents.

"Quite the celebration," Carmen murmured, appearing at my elbow. "Richard always did have exquisite taste."

I forced a smile. "Thank you. Summer deserves the best."

Across the room, I noticed Kaiser approaching Summer's group of friends. He leaned in close, saying something that made them laugh. Then he handed Summer a drink—some sort of cocktail with a decorative umbrella.

"Excuse me," I said to Carmen, moving toward them.

But the crowd shifted, and when I reached the spot, Summer was gone. Kaiser stood alone, chatting casually with another guest.

"Have you seen Summer?" I asked him.

He gestured toward the terrace doors. "She said she needed some air."

I nodded my thanks and continued searching, unconcerned. Summer often stepped outside for quiet moments during parties.

---

I don't know how long it was before the screams started.

The first sound was so faint I almost missed it—a muffled cry from somewhere beyond the terrace. Then came the commotion of voices, running footsteps.

"Summer!" I called, pushing through the crowd that had suddenly gathered near the terrace doors.

Two of Summer's friends stood frozen, their faces pale. "We found her... back there," one whispered, pointing toward a service corridor.

I ran, my heels clicking frantically against the marble floor. The corridor was dimly lit and narrow, leading to a storage area. There, crumpled against the wall, was my daughter.

"Summer!" I dropped to my knees beside her.

Her dress was torn, her eyes unfocused and glassy. She tried to speak but only a moan escaped her lips.

"What happened?" I demanded, looking up at the gathering crowd.

No one answered. Someone called for an ambulance. Someone else mentioned police.

---

The hospital room was sterile and cold. Summer lay motionless on the bed, her clothes replaced by a thin hospital gown. The doctor had just finished explaining the evidence collection process when Richard burst through the door.

"I came as soon as I heard," he said, his lawyer's demeanor cracking for once. He approached the bed slowly, reaching for Summer's hand.

"She can't talk yet," I whispered, stroking Summer's hair away from her face.

Richard nodded grimly. "I'll make sure that bastard pays."

---

Weeks passed in a blur of police interviews and legal preparations. Summer gave her testimony through tears and halting sentences. The detective—a woman named Sarah Morrison—handled her with gentle efficiency.

"We have a strong case," Richard assured us after each meeting. "The physical evidence is damning. Kaiser won't get away with this."

At home, he spread case files across his desk, reviewing witness statements and evidence reports late into the night.

"Justice will be served," he promised, squeezing my shoulder. "I'll make sure of it."

But Summer grew quieter each day. She stopped answering her phone, barely ate, and spent hours locked in her room.

"She needs time," Richard said whenever I expressed concern. "This is normal trauma response. Once the trial brings closure, she'll start healing."

I wanted to believe him. Needed to believe him.

What I didn't see was the way his eyes flickered when he mentioned Carmen's name during our conversations. Or how he sometimes paused mid-sentence when his phone buzzed with a message he'd never show me.

I didn't know then that the man I'd trusted for twenty years was already planning to betray us both.

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